Tone Clusters : The Joyce Carol Oates Discussion Group
May 1 to May 15, 1997



Subject:   Theft
            Date: Sun, 04 May 1997 21:50:13 -0700
           From:  josh frankel jfrankel@gladstone.uoregon.edu
      Reply-To:  jco@usfca.edu
               To: jco@usfca.edu


what is the theme of your story--Theft?


Subject: Re: Theft Date: Mon, 5 May 1997 01:04:04 -0400 (EDT) From: "Matthew A. Cheney" mac5519@is.NYU.EDU Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu On Sun, 4 May 1997, josh frankel wrote: > what is the theme of your story--Theft? > Well, mine is mostly about alien abduction and how it relates to the battle over a balanced budget. Joyce Carol Oates's story (which, by the way, is much less subversive than mine, although the talking dog I sometimes converse with late at night tells me I'm a far less entertaining writer; I plan to boil him up tomorrow and see what sorts of themes reside in him) later became part of her novel MARYA: A LIFE, which I recommend, despite the hideous cover on the paperback, if you can find a copy at a used bookstore -- but anyway, the theme? Well. "ThemeS" would probably be more appropriate, but you might start out with things like alienation, friendship, perseverance, class (in all senses), and, if you hadn't thought of it already, theft. But then, you read the story just like I did, and you've probably read it more recently than I have, so you might be in trouble if you believe anything I've written. And what are you doing up so late? Happy reading, Matthew Cheney
Date: Mon, 12 May 1997 20:11:39 -0400 From: "Gary K. Clabaugh, Ed. D." clabaugha@lasalle.edu To: jco@usfca.edu Subject: violence in oates I'm interested in why Oates' works are so violent.How essential is it or is it sometimes gratuitous or even purely commercial?
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Mon, 12 May 1997 18:47:38 +0000 From: Francie Schwartz fabela@gte.net Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu Gary K. Clabaugh, Ed. D. wrote: > > I'm interested in why Oates' works are so violent.How essential is it or is it sometimes gratuitous or > even purely commercial? Violent compared to what? Commercial? I don't think so. That she happens to be one of the most prolific novelists of our time makes this generalization seem so vague... it's like saying Picasso's paintings were filled with gratuitous rage... which books? Which paintings? As one who admits to not having read everything Oates ever wrote, I can say it's not the violence that's so striking... it's the emotional truth of her characters. Francie
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Mon, 12 May 97 23:50:40 -0400 From: t-hulslander t-hulslander@top.monad.net Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu As someone who has just about everything I could find written by JCO, I find that the level of violence in her work seems to reflect the violence in our society. "them" has a certain level of violence; racially motivated, poverty-motivated, etc. I do not think the violence is commercial, any more so than the acts of violence we see on the news each night. Abhorrant as it is, violence is a fact of life in this world, and I think what the writer strives for is the drive behind it. JCO has that ability to let us see inside the minds of her characters, both the violators and the violated. Don't you sometimes see or read something that an actual person has done, some crime, and wondered, WHAT was going on in that person's head???? It is just my opinion, but I would rather read a fictional account than to watch some program titled,"The World's Most Violent Crimes!" on t.v. (I saw something like that in my local listing.) 'Till next time, Krista
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Mon, 12 May 1997 20:56:46 -0800 From: Randy Souther Randy Souther Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu As I'm sure many of you know, JCO has often been charged with excessive violence, to which she even responded in print in an article called "Why is your writing so violent?" But I have to sympathize with the people who feel compelled to ask this question; and I think it is a good question, and a valid question, if we try to see what prompts it. I think there is something qualitatively different about the violence in JCO's works compared to the majority of fiction out there. As far as the number of violent episodes in a given JCO work, I have no doubt that there are far fewer than in a given thriller, horror novel, etc. currently on the bestseller lists. It is not the quantity of violence, but the quality that compells the question. In its simplest terms, most of the violence in popular fiction--regardless of how pervasive it is--is forgettable; most of the violence in JCO's work--regardless of how infrequently it occurs--is unforgettable. JCO's physical violence is so intertwined with psychic violence, and we as readers are so caught-up in the psyche of JCO's characters (this is my experience in any case), that the violence is, in some sense, *experienced*, rather than merely witnessed. With other books the violence stays on the page; JCO often manages to put it in your head. So the question, "why is your writing so violent?", though no doubt annoying when asked over and over and over again, shouldn't be dismissed too quickly. Perhaps some people are really asking, "why does your writing affect me so much?" Or maybe they really are accusing JCO of something: of making them experience violence; but since you can't seriously make such an accusation any more than you can seriously accuse someone of being a witch, the question comes out, "why is your *writing* so violent?" I had the same kind of reading experience with Dostoevsky, particularly THE POSSESSED and THE BROTHERS KARAMAZOV. I think JCO's "violence" is of the same depth and intensity, and this is what accounts for its looming large in people's minds. Randy Souther
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Mon, 12 May 1997 22:14:46 -0700 From: Nikki Senecal senecal@scf-fs.usc.edu To: jco@usfca.edu >I'm interested in why Oates' works are so violent.How essential is it or >is it sometimes gratuitous or >even purely commercial? Would you ask whether bullfights were essential to, say, Hemingway? Do you wonder why Steven King's works are so violent? I would recommend Oates's essay published in the New York Times Book Review titled, "Why is Your Writing So Violent?" And I am genuinely interested in your response to my initial questions. Oates's violence and its reception are part of my dissertation. Nikki Senecal
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Tue, 13 May 1997 06:46:32 -0700 (PDT) From: "V. Suzanne Drake" tanager@crl.com Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu Krista, I agree that jco has a wonderful ability to see into the minds of her characters. She illuminates the dark side of us all and makes us see that it is in *us* as well as *them*. Suzanne in N. California >
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Tue, 13 May 97 11:42:33 -0400 From: t-hulslander t-hulslander@top.monad.net Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu Suzanne, My point exactly...you put it much more succinctly! Krista
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Tue, 13 May 1997 11:15:27 -0500 (CDT) From: smancin1@ix.netcom.com Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu On 05/13/97 06:46:32 you wrote: > >Krista, I agree that jco has a wonderful ability to see into the minds of >her characters. She illuminates the dark side of us all and makes us see >that it is in *us* as well as *them*. Suzanne in N. California > >> > > Well put, Suzanne. I agree that reading Oates makes us realize that we all have a dark side. It is simply a part of the human condition. Remember the classical period when gods were perceived as deified humans and contained both evil and divine aspects. Realizing that good and evil coexist in our world helps make sense of seemingly chaotic world events. smb
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Tue, 13 May 1997 12:57:03 -0400 (EDT) From: Heather L Ormiston hormisto@mission.mvnc.edu Reply-To: I have really enjoyed the conversation about the violence in Oates. I was just discussing this with my British Lit. professor the other day. She said that the use of violence is one of the major traits of the writers of the second half of the twentieth century. I really think that Oates takes this to a higher level because, as some of you have said, she is using the violence for a higher purpose. She doesn't just write something violent to shock her readers. I can't imagine Foxfire, my favorite by her so far, without the violence that the girls in that book experience. It would take so much away from her characters because humans do not always act and react in a calm and non-violent manner. I think this is one of the many things that makes her characters and stories so vivid for me. Heather Ormiston hormisto@mvnc.edu
Date: Tue, 13 May 1997 14:59:04 +0000 From: SHELLYE SHELLYE@Prodigy.Net To: jco@usfca.edu Subject: Re: violence in oates Heather L Ormiston wrote: > > I have really enjoyed the conversation about the violence in > Oates. I was just discussing this with my British Lit. professor the other > day. She said that the use of violence is one of the major traits of the > writers of the second half of the twentieth century. I really think that > Oates takes this to a higher level because, as some of you have said, she > is using the violence for a higher purpose. She doesn't just write > something violent to shock her readers. I can't imagine Foxfire, my > favorite by her so far, without the violence that the girls in that book > experience. It would take so much away from her characters because humans > do not always act and react in a calm and non-violent manner. I think this > is one of the many things that makes her characters and stories so vivid > for me. > Heather Ormiston > hormisto@mvnc.edu just read your post and i noticed that you mention Foxfire being you rfavorit book--have you read Because It Is Bitter And Because Its my Heart?? That by far is my favorite--with We Were The Mulvaneys close behind. I have to say that I haven't read Foxfire--but i happened to accidently see the movie and thought it was awful!!! Have you seen the movie?? If so, please reassure me that the book is better. Take Care Shellye
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Tue, 13 May 97 16:22:18 -0400 From: t-hulslander t-hulslander@top.monad.net To: jco@usfca.edu Shellye, I just read your post and agree with you about the two books you mentioned. I loved We Were the Mulvaneys. Have you read "them"? An early book, and it was my first JCO read, years ago. I keep buying copies of it, just to read two or three times a year. The characters, experiences, are unforgetable. Krista
Date: Tue, 13 May 1997 16:57:15 +0000 From: SHELLYE SHELLYE@Prodigy.Net To: jco@usfca.edu Subject: Re: violence in oates t-hulslander wrote: > > Shellye, > I just read your post and agree with you about the two books you > mentioned. I loved We Were the Mulvaneys. Have you read "them"? An > early book, and it was my first JCO read, years ago. I keep buying > copies of it, just to read two or three times a year. The characters, > experiences, are unforgetable. > Krista Thanks for the tip--i haven't read "Them" I'm glad to see that you enjoyed We WERE....I haven't spoken with many who have liked the book. I am currently a songwriter in the New Haven, CT area and have recently just finished a song which i feel to be my best to date--it is based on Marianne from the book. For some reason i just couldn't stop thinking about that character after finishing the book and this song just popped out!! When people say "Thats such a sad song...what is it about?" I tell them---read the book!!! Shellye
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Wed, 14 May 1997 00:17:25 -0400 (EDT) From: "Matthew A. Cheney" mac5519@is.NYU.EDU Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu The questions you have to ask about the violence in Oates's work are the questions you ask about any important element in a work of fiction: why is it there, is it integral to the story, why is it written the way it is written, and does it seem justified? To some extent, everyone will answer differently, based on our own tastes and prejudices and experience, but there should be (in most cases) some sort of consensus. Why is it that so many people notice the violence in Oates? What makes it stand out for so many people? Is this a good thing? When her short stories are collected in a book and we're able to read one story after another, does this make the violence stand out more than if the story were just one in a magazine? This last question occurred to me after I read a number of stories from HEAT in one sitting -- the violence seemed to be a mannerism in some of the stories, though other stories seem perfectly modulated, perfectly real and beautiful works of art. But I can't help feeling that a story like "The Knife" is simply gratuitous, even sadistic, an example of all of Oates's worst tendencies. Why do I notice this? Because she a female writer? No, I would think it was a bad story no matter who wrote it! (It's even more irksome because I want my favorite writers to always write sublimely, every single word! But then, even perfection gets boring, and I'm grateful to her for taking risks.) More questions than answers, I think, but the questions dig to the core of what is Oates: what is great and what is not. Matthew Cheney
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Tue, 13 May 1997 23:49:49 -0700 From: ccaddick@capcollege.bc.ca Hi all! I wanted to respond to the topic about violence in Oates' work. I chose some of Oates' work for an English assignment and found that I became very wierded out because my brain came up with gorey, gross pictures of what had happened in the stories and realized that Oates did not give many detail -- my imagination was describing the awful pictures! Her writing is brilliant in this way. This I found disturbing and scarey about myself and felt quite uncomfortable -- I couldn't believe I could come up with such strange and gross ideas and pictures. I didn't find this type of violence commercial at all since I was responsible for the images I was seeing in my mind. This was especially true for the short story "Heat". I was very disturbed with myself. Speaking of movies, I haven't seen FoxFire but I did see the movie Smooth Moves - it was supposed to be based on the short story "Where Are You Going? Where Have You Been?". The movie was not true to the story and just plain old cheezy! Treat Williams and Laura Dern were the stars. It was REALLY BAD. Thanks for reading this! carol
Subject: Re: violence in Oates Date: Wed, 14 May 1997 21:39:50 +0930 From: gjscales@camtech.net.au (Greg Scales) Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu I don't think JCO, or any other author, needs to apologise for including violence in their work. I've only read a small part of the enormous JCO canon, but I've never encountered a violent episode in her writing (even including Zombie) that seemed unnecessary or gratuitous or prurient. For my taste, JCO handles violence as intelligently and as adroitly as every other subject she deals with. Many readers, of course, prefer novels which ignore the darker side of human nature, hence the current vogue for writers like Jane Austen. Joyce Carol Oates appears to be deeply interested in the problem of human evil, and her writing is all the more thought-provoking and powerful because of this.
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Wed, 14 May 1997 09:42:12 -0400 (EDT) From: Heather L Ormiston hormisto@mission.mvnc.edu Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu No, I have not seen the movie, but I have read a little bit about it and it does sound awful. In the movie, it is updated to the nineties and I think that a lot of the film may be overdone. In relation to the discussion on violence, I think that the violence in Foxfire might not translate well to the screen because I think that film has to overstate things sometimes to make them understandable. The characters in the book are very well written, of course, and I'm not sure how well they could be acted. I have wanted to see it for awhile, but when I began to hear about some of the changes that had been made I became skeptical. I have not read Because it is bitter . . ., but I think it is one of the ones that I will get around to this summer. I did read We Were the Mulvaneys and I loved it too! That book is also a good example of how Oates uses violence. I also do not think that it would do well as a movie because so much of the action and subsequent violence is interior, and therefore better suited to a novel. hormisto@mvnc.edu
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Wed, 14 May 1997 09:45:55 -0400 (EDT) From: Heather L Ormiston hormisto@mission.mvnc.edu Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu Shellye, I would love to hear your song! Marriane is such an interesting character. I think Patrick was my favorite, though. I am not sure why, but I found his sense of devotion very appealing. Now you've got me thinking that I should write something about that . . . heather
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Wed, 14 May 1997 10:14:49 -0400 (EDT) From: LoriLamb@aol.com Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu In response to what Matthew wrote about "Knife", I don't agree. When I read H eat, I read it all in one sitting, too. I thought that "Knife" and "Naked" complemented each other well. I don't think the violence in "Knife" is "just for show" in any way. I found the story to be very real to life. Supposedly, a great number of rapes go unreported. The fact that the female character had the knife, but could not bring herself to use it is very telling. It echoes the larger theme of the story perfectly. Also, in Naked, the female character is ashamed of what has happened to her. She makes her way home naked and hides in the bushes outside her own house so that her family won't see her. Same kind of thing going on here as in Knife I think. Many of JCO's female characters seem to exhibit this seemingly dualistic strength/shame. These women try so much to be strong and independent, but then they seem to take it to an extreme,and can't show "weakness" when it really isn't weakness at all--it is a violent act that has been committed against the and they have every right to complain and expose it. I wonder why they can't? (A friend of mine who has read only Heat read it and said that stories of this kind made her mad and made her realize how she "did not want to be." This could be it.) This also makes me think of Marianne in the Mulvaneys and Marya in Marya: A Life. Perhaps this is why I like Foxfire so much. The girls in Foxfire do expose the wrongs and actually do something about what has happened. Good discussion! LL
Subject: Re: violence in oates Date: Thu, 15 May 1997 10:10:02 -0400 (EDT) From: RJohn713@aol.com Reply-To: jco@usfca.edu Regarding "The Knife," you might be interested in a little background. Joyce's Princeton-area friend, Alicia Ostriker (a renowned poet who teaches at Rutgers), was raped and wrote an article about the experience for THE VILLAGE VOICE. Joyce read the article and based "The Knife" on Ostriker's experience (Ostriker said she "wasn't offended at all" and is an admirer of JCO's work). In so much of JCO's fiction about violent events (e.g., "Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been?", BLACK WATER, ZOMBIE, et al), the germ of the story is a newspaper or magazine article. Greg J.
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